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Post by george on Aug 9, 2009 10:29:25 GMT -5
Warning! Some chapters contain minor language! Read at risk!
Chapter 1
They heard a noise, like metal striking metal. Then they started running stealthily. Then, someone yelled out "I see them! Their heading north!" 'Son of a monkey, they saw me' Goosey said. 'Meh, we can take em.' George answered. 'Over there! Take em by surprise!' Goosey suggested.
George and Goosey vs Solider 1
Soldier 1 taken by surprise! Defense -1
Your Turn Goosey slashes Soldier 1. Soldier 1 takes 5 damage! 20-5=15. George punches Soldier 1 in the face! Soldier 1 is knocked out and cannot move!
Enemy Turn. Soldier 1 is knocked out and cannot move!
Your turn. Goosey slashes Soldier 1. Soldier 1 takes 5 damage! 15-5=10. Soldier 1 wakes up! George spears Soldier 1. Soldier 1 takes 4 damage! 10-4=6.
Enemy turn. Soldier 1 spears Goosey. Critical hit!! Goosey takes 8 damage! 30-8=22.
Your turn. Goosey spears Soldier 1. Soldier 1 takes 6 damage. 6-6=death. Soldier 1 fainted!
EXP: 35. Next Level: 105
*End Battle*
'That was easy.' George concluded. 'Not again!' Goosey complained
George and Goosey vs Soldier 1, Soldier 2, Soldier 3
'We must be getting close to something' Goosey cut in the epic battle scene.
Your turn. Goosey casts Impale! Guard 1 is gets scared! Gaurd 1's defense drops to 0!
George roundhouse kicks Guard 1. Critical hit!! Guard 1 takes 20 damage! 20-20=death. Guard 1 fainted!
Enemy turn. Guard 2 slashes Goosey. Goosey takes 4 damage! 22-4=18 Gaurd 3 slashes Goosey. Goosey takes 5 damage! 18-5=13
Your Turn. Goosey summons Knights of the Round Table! Pwn! Guard 2 takes 15 damage! 35-15=20 Guard 3 takes 21 damage! 25-21=4 George sword whips Guard 3. Gaurd 3 takes 6 damage! 4-6=death Guard 3 fainted!
Enemy Turn. Guard 2 uses rock spear. Critical hit! Goosey takes 10 damage, but his sword absorbed 2! 13-10+2=5
Your turn. Goosey spears Guard 2, the Knights of the Round Table cast helps! Guard 2 takes 14 damage! 20-14=6 George spears Guard 2. MISS!
Enemy Turn. Guard 2 defends! Defense: 2+2=4
Your turn. Goosey uses a healing medecine. Goosey's HP is restored! George spears Guard 2. Critical hit! Guard 2 takes 7 damage! 6-7=death. Guard 3 fainted!
EXP: 65 Next Level: 40
*End Battle*
'I wonder why we started running into all these Guards...'George thought aloud. 'Yea, Guards are never out in a forest, unless theres an Elite...'Goosey finished. 'You don't think?' 'If we run into one of The Elite 24, man could that be huge! We could get so much rep for that! Maybe even better weapons!' *They each look at their not-as-sharp-as-they-used-to-be swords and nicked armor*
They came upon an old shack, with a hermit sitting on a bench outside, mixing up medicine. 'Excuse me, but could you lend us some medicine? We could use it for our travel.' Goosey asked politely. 'Warriors! Please come on in! I'll give you my best medicine. And how about a nice hot meal? You look weary!' The Hermit had a shabby place, but had good intentions. 'Why thanks. You know, the world could be so much better if everyone was like you.' George commented. 'Why thank you! To tell the truth, most youth aren't like you two. All they want is a proud rep and the latest weapons,' the Hermit said. *George and Goosey share uneasy looks* 'Where are my manners!?! Im Muse, Elemental Hermit. But you can call me Bruce.' Bruce said. 'Bruce huh? Well Im George, and this here is Goosey. Goosey is his nickname. His real name is Paul though.' George introduced themselves.
*later*
‘Bruce, thank you so much for the meal and medicine; it was really kind of you!' Goosey thanked him. 'Sure thing! If you ever need any help, just come on back!' Bruce replied. 'Will do,’ Goosey thanked him once more. 'Im just wondering, where do you two warriors intend on going?' 'Well, right now we are on the case of one of The Elite 24. We feel one is close by, as we keep running into Guards,' George explained. 'The Elite 24?' Bruce asked. 'Going up against them will be a challenge! You need more than just two people to take one of them on! Why don't I tag along and help out? I know magical elements that can really be of use!' *Goosey and George talk to each other out of hearing range about it* 'We'd be honored if you'd join us, Bruce!' George and Goosey said.
*Bruce joined your party!* Bruce. Level 19. Max HP: 80 Attack Power: 12 Defense: 6 Agility: 2
End of chapter.
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Post by David on Aug 9, 2009 10:55:25 GMT -5
This is an interesting *Story/RP* ... It reminds me well of the battles in Final Fantasy ... Great job! .. I kinda wanna read more and I don't typically read! lol ... But it's original and with a little bit of edits and formatting you may be able to may this type of story a hit!
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Post by george on Aug 9, 2009 15:16:13 GMT -5
The first three chapters started out bad. But after a few weeks of break, got better (not as battle filled, more story)
Chapter 2
Bruce was telling Goosey and George all the strange business that has been going on lately. ‘Tons of Guards and Class 2 Soldiers have been around lately. They were killing anyone who got in their way. I got in their way, but they let me live since I gave them meals. I didn't want to, but I wanted to live.' Bruce explained 'Class 2 Soldiers? Thats not normal.' Goosey questioned. 'They were all saying something about how The Elite 25 or something were gonna rule all the lands someday.' Bruce continued. 'What! We can't let that happen!' George almost yelled! Something must of heard him, because their was movement to their right.
George, Goosey, and Bruce vs C2 Soldier 1 and Guard 1
You were taken by surprise!
Enemy turn. C2Soldier 1 uses Vertical slice! George takes 10 damage! 35-10=25 Guard 1 spears George! George takes 4 damage! 25-4=21
Your Turn. Goosey spears C2 Soldier 1. Critical Hit!! C2 Soldier 1 takes 13 damage! 50-13=37 George slashes C2 Soldier 1. C2 Soldier 1 takes 6 damage! 37-6=32 Bruce summons Mystical Attack! C2 Soldier's Defense drops to 0 C2 Soldier's Attack drops by 5! C2 Soldier takes 10 damage! 32-10=22
Guard 1 runs!
Enemy Turn. C2 Soldier 1 spears George MISS!! 'Man this isn't his day!' George cut in.
Your turn. Goosey slashes C2 Soldier 1. C2 Soldier 1 takes 6 damage. 22-6=16 George punches C2 Soldier 1 in the face! C2 Soldier 1 takes 4 damage and is knocked out! 16-4= 12 Bruce uses Bow and Arrow! C2 Soldier 1 gets hit 4 times taking 4 damage! 12-4=8 C2 Soldier 1 wakes up!
Enemy Turn. C2 Soldier surrenders! George learns Vertical Slice! Goosey learns Vertical Slice!
EXP: 100 Next Level: 40 Level up!
George Level 4 Max HP Rises by 8! (43) Max Attack power rises by 4! (14) Defense rises by 2! (5) Agility rises by 1! (4)
Goosey Level 4 Max HP rises by 8! (38) Max Attack power rises by 4! (16) Defense rises by 3! (6) Agility rises by 1! (3)
Bruce EXP needed for level 20: 4,031
Total EXP: 2,020 G/G next level: 330
*end battle*
'Man that was like a mini boss battle!' George commented. 'Agreed. We must be getting even closer now.' Bruce said in agreement. 'Guys quiet down! I see something!' George whispered. Bruce and Goosey went over to see what George was talking about. There was a camp like area full of Guards and Soldiers, Snipers, and Machine Gunners throughout the area. There was also German Sheppard’s guarding the back entrance. In the middle of the front courtyard Elite 16 (they all had numbers) was walking with a few Class 3 Guards. 'I have an idea,' Goosey told them. 'At dusk, we set up canons to go off at 10PM, and then we go in the back door. To distract the dogs, Bruce drugs some meat so they are knocked out for a few hours.. Then we ransack the back guard house and take out everyone until only Elite 16 is left, then we take him out.' 'Good idea, if only we have Time based canons!' George mocked. 'I can figure something out like that.' Bruce figured. 'Good. We'll start setting up after a short nap. Seeing as its 4PM right now, we start setting up at 9 or so. I'll set my watch to vibrate for 8:50.' Goosey finished.
End of Chapter
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Post by David on Aug 9, 2009 15:35:23 GMT -5
lol, a short nap! ... wtf .. .... you should make these a bit longer ...
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Post by george on Aug 9, 2009 16:52:58 GMT -5
Some are long, some aren't. I type these on Microsoft Word; I try to make it 2-3 pages long. This one is short.
Chapter 3
*bizz....bizz...biz-* Goosey’s alarm started going off. 'Guys wake up...its almost 9.' Goosey said wearily, but George was already up. 'Its 9 already?' Bruce said in between yawning. 'That was fast.' 'George, what are you doing up?' Goosey asked. 'Man you must not have been tired.' 'I’ve been watching them, figuring their patrol routes.' George started. 'I've figured out how we are going to go in. There are pairs of guards that walk around as if they are randomly. They go in four different paths. On the third one, they go into a blind spot that no one else can see. We take them out and suit up. We wait a while, and when more come to check on us, we say we heard something, but it was just a chipmunk or something. We keep going, and the next time we are there, Bruce comes and we take him captive. We take him to the jail, and then we take out the guards and get everyone to help. We go back out, and at that time our timed stuff goes off. Then we all ransack the houses. Im thinking there are at least 3-4 people in the jail cells, with probably 2-3 Guards. Im thinking they will have guns, so it will be hard.' 'Good, but how do you suspect we pose as Guards?' Bruce questioned. 'And what if they don't let you take me to the jail?' 'We are gonna take the Guards and wear what they are. If they don't? Improvise.' 'What if there is no on in the cells? What if there are a butt load of Guards? What if-' 'Enough what if's!' Goosey cut in. 'For if some reason, we don' get to the jail, Bruce you cause mayhem. Hopefully they will call on a pair to come see whats going on. We'll take that call.' George thought.
Later
'Here they come! Wait for my mark, and shoot them!' George whispered softly. 'Man this is boring. We should fight against this Elite guy. All of together can take him.' The one Guard was saying. 'Don't move!' George said quietly. The two of them came out with Dart guns that would put someone out for 24 hours. 'HE-' The second Guard started to say. 'Don't yell!' Goosey punched the Guard so he wouldn't yell. 'Your planning a revolt?' George asked, making sure the second guard was OK. He was. 'No, it was just a thought. We hate these jobs. Walk around all night with a really low pay protecting some guy who can protect himself on his own,' Guard 1 said. 'We were planning on taking him out as it is.' George carefully said, watching Guard 1's expression. No change, he was serious. George motioned Goosey to go get Bruce, careful not to say any names. Goosey was back in seconds. Guard 2 looked uneasily. 'How many of you are there?' Guard 2 questioned. 'Theres-' Goosey started, but George elbowed him, 'No reason you need to know that.' Buzz...'are you ther-' buzz buzz 'report-' Guard 2's walkie-talkie buzzed. 'Guard 12 reporting in. We thought we heard something, and are making sure it was just an animal or something.' Guard 1...apparently Guard 12 said. 'Do you need backup?' Came the voice. 'No. It was just a chipmunk.' 'Well return to patrol then.' 'After one last look around, sir.' 'Allright. Don't take too long or Im sending backup,’ the voice said after a moment of thought. Guard 12 turned a switch and put the walkie-talker away. 'He didn't hear any of that did he?' George suspiciously asked. 'No, you can only hear when you hit the one button. 'Guard 12 said. 'Good.' 'Whats going on? Did they catch us?' Bruce mumbled, clearly not paying attention. 'No. We were just planning on what to do.' George reassured him. 'We will take you in as prisoners. To know we both are serious… you and Guard 2,' Guard 12 suggested. 'Deal.' George and Guard 12 agreed.
Moments later
'Sir, we caught three people up to no good. We are bringing them in.' Guard 12 said into the walkie-takie. 'Good job, you will get a raise for this!' The voice muzzled. 'Guard 12 out.' He turned off the Walkie-talkie. 'The timed weapons are set up, right? Along with everything else? And you told him the plan?' Guard 12 asked George. 'Yes, yes, and yes.' George answered.
Guard 12 and George in disguise took Goosey, the Guard 2, and Bruce into the courtyard and into a cell in the jail. 'We will be back at in a bit when there are only us and another pair of guards on patrol.' Guard 12 whispered softly into Goosey's ear so no one would hear him.
End of Chapter.
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Post by george on Aug 10, 2009 17:52:06 GMT -5
They will start getting longer soon...
Chapter 4
It had been around 15 minutes, and Guard 12 and George were about ready to put their plan into affect, but they met another pair of guards first. The other pairs were going into their cabins. "What were those intruders up to?" the one guard asked, with #16 on his arm patch. "They said they were going to sneak in and dispatch the Elite Soldier." Guard 12 answered uneasily. “We found them hiding in a ditch. At first, we didn’t see them.” George finished. “Dispatch the Elite? Man I’d love to do that. I mean, we are just dragged out of our homes on our time off and told to protect someone that doesn’t need it, all with $1 an hour!” Guard 16 exclaimed. “So you really would help take him out?” George asked, carefully thinking about what to say. “Yes!” Both of them answered. “Well… … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … … …” Guard 12 told them the plan. “…We’re in.” The second guard, Guard 3, agreed. Guards 3 and 16 pretended to go to their cabins, but had been mysteriously told to interrogate the prisoners. George and Guard 12 waited eagerly for the crap they set up to go off. George snuck into the back, and put some meat at the foot of the door, where no one could easily see it. It was a few more seconds until it went into action. There was a huge bang noise. C3 must have gone off, because there was a new entry to the jail. Guards 2, 3, 8, 16, Bruce, and Goosey came rushing out, and hit the deck. The machine guns and grenade launchers went off; taking out every guard on patrol, mind their party. Guard 8 was a captive who was in the same cell as the other two. Everyone else made a run for it who escaped. *** Meanwhile, George had crouched down by the back door, and threw the meat with sleep poison in them (non lethal of course) injected, to knock the dogs out. He made his way into the Guard tower. He took out the Soldiers and a couple of Engineers out with stealth. Slashes to the radio and power supply put an end to them. Right as he finished, the stuff went off. He looked out the window at the dark courtyard. A platoon of Special Soldiers came running from nowhere, ready for action. They did not attack us though. They went into the cabins and knocked out the weary clueless Guards and Special Ops Soldiers. “Crap!” A Special Ops Commando yelled. He pulled out a pistol and came for George, who was looking mysteriously for his friends.
George Vs. Special Ops Commando
Your turn. George karate chops SO Commando! Commando takes 7 damage! 100-7=93.
Enemy Turn. Commando shoots George! George takers 32 damage!! 43-32=11.
Your Turn. George punches Commando in the face! Effect x3! Commando takes 12 damage and is knocked out! 93-12=81.
Enemy Turn. Commando is out cold and faints!
EXP: 120 Next Level: 210
Then, huge bursts of gun fire and sniper rounds were heard. Guard 3 took a hit from a sniper and stood up from the pain, only to be taken down from a machine gunner.
George crawled over to the Machine gunner nest. He came in from below, took a grenade, and threw it in. End of that.
*** The base was just about cleared, except for the top floor of the main structure. No one was left in the courtyard. The party moved for the structure.
End of Chapter.
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Post by David on Aug 11, 2009 9:05:25 GMT -5
Haha, those they basically recruited a bunch of their prior enemies to help ... getting good
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Post by george on Aug 11, 2009 19:22:24 GMT -5
Shortest chapter ftw!
Chapter 5
If you were a nomad who happened to come across this courtyard, it would have seemed like hell struck. Bodies were everywhere, seemingly dead guard dogs, ruins from explosions, blood coasted tents. Normally, you would have been captured if you walked onto this area uninvited. Seeing as there was no conscious people to jail you, Josh was lucky. He noticed George and his party moving swiftly so he went over and asked what was going on. “Whats going on?” Goosey pulled this nomad low behind a wall, in case anyone saw him from the last remaining building (it was there originally, and was the strongest fortified structure). “Who are you and what do you want?” George questioned. The guy reached into his coat, but five rifles to his head stopped him. “I was getting ID.” The guy explained. They let him get it, still with a couple rifles locked and loaded. He pulled out his wallet and gave it to George. “Very well, Josh. You’re welcome to help us out, or keep wandering.” George responded after a moment. “What exactly are you doing?” “Ever here of The Elite 24?” Josh nodded. “One of them is in the top floor of that there building,” George pointed to the location. “This is all of us, we managed to get inside help, and now have him in his last stand.” “Im in,” Josh answered after thinking it through. He grabbed a stranded rifle and then a few clips from some of the bodies. The conscious ones, so when they were to wake up, they would be weaponless. The first floor was clear. A few scared Soldiers here and there, but they were knocked unconscious with a tranquilizer. The group moved in single file, each a foot away from the one ahead. George went first, followed by Guard 2, Guard 12, Bruce, Guard 16, Guard 8, Josh, and Goosey taking up the rear. George stood outside each door, whilst Guards 2 and 12 stormed in to clear the area, then Goosey went in to make sure everything was good. Guard 16 and Josh stood by the door in case help was needed. It never was. They dispatched those who shot at them, which were few. But when someone is outnumbered 7 to 1, they have no chance. Those who surrendered where even knocked out. Only those who fought back were killed. They went up to the second floor. Right away, George stopped the party and scouted ahead. There was a Soldier at each door. “Thank fudge there’s only 6 doors, and not more.” George said before shooting everyone. Usually, he would use his sword, but when the enemy has a Magnum .45 and AK-47 on them, guns are the answer. And this was no time for stealth.
End of Chapter.
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Post by David on Aug 11, 2009 19:37:14 GMT -5
It was short .. .. I'm like left in suspense every thread ...
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Post by george on Aug 11, 2009 19:50:41 GMT -5
Chapter 6
They finally reached the top floor. It had been 3 stories of hell after the first floor (5 floors total). The halls were suspiciously empty. Before going into each room, the party put silencers on the pistols they picked up and shot through each door before barging in and shooting anything that moved. Right now, they killed at no stop. Why? Because they had no mercy, since they found out from the one Class 3 Soldier what the Elite in this building was planning on doing. “And stay down, son of a bitch.” Bruce said as he killed one of the Guards shooting at him. No matter how much he was outnumbered, he won. Ironic? Maybe. But for right now, none of us will know, at least anytime soon. Once the out 5 rooms were cleared, they braced themselves for the last room, where they knew the Elite was at. They reloaded there weapons to full ammo (new clips, unless more than half full), and braced themselves. They slowly opened the door, behind a bulletproof riot-proof shield they picked up, in case of being shot at. There was a nice size of Soldiers in the room, but they all didn’t budge. The one pointed up, saying that the Elite told them not to fight. He wanted to talk face to face to George. Guard 2 and Josh took the weapons from everyone, while Guard 12 watched the door. George and Goosey made their way up the ladder to the roof. They found the Elite 16 sitting on his chair, relaxing. Like he was waiting for them. “Bravo, you guys,” Elite 16 laughed. “I actually didn’t think you would actually pull this off. I even told my soldiers about 30 minutes ago, that if any explosions and gun fire break out, just sit in wait and tell whoever comes to come up here.” Goosey looked suspiciously around. There was no one else up here. He even looked off the sides and behind the chimney structures that came up. There was nothing. George even scanned the horizon in search of snipers. Nothing. Whoever this guy was, he was either really clever, or really dumb. “I know what you’re planning on doing. And we won’t let you. Ever,” George objected. “And we aren’t going to change our minds,” Goosey added in. “If your minds are made, I have an idea. You two verse me. No guns, no cheap shots, nothing. Just sword and armor.” Everyone took off their armor, guns, ammo, and everything else except a sword and shield. Then, George and Goosey walked over to the edge and threw down what they just took off. They knew one side will be joining the pile soon. Both prayed it wasn’t them. George and Goosey Vs. Elite 16 “Flip for who goes first,” George suggested. “You go first,” Elite 16 confidently decided. Your turn. George slashes Elite 16! 175-15=160. Goosey spears Elite 16! 160-12=148. Enemy Turn. Elite 16 Vertical Slices George! 70-9=61. Your Turn. George uses shield break! Elite 16’s Defense drops by 13! Goosey roll attacks Elite 16! (Roll then jump up and slash 4 times) Critical Hit!! 148-23= 125. Enemy Turn. Elite 16 Vertical Slices George! Miss! Your Turn. George slashes Elite 16! Elite 16 moves, taking half damage! 125-6=119. Goosey spears Elite 16! 119-16=103. Elite 16 motions to stop the fight. “Pretty good, but can you keep up?” Elite 16 stopped the fight to ask. Elite 16 started floating, and the sky turned dark. He was struck by lightening, and fell. He arose after two seconds and he was back to full health. His weapon was changed from some especially custom sword, to a big, one handed, sword of death. It was a blood red blade, with a skull imprinted on the handle. It looked hot enough to burn before it even touched anything. He sized up the two of them, who looked like wimps compared to him. He gripped his sword with both hands, and was about ready to finish off George and Goosey in one blow. He started to swing…
End of Chapter
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Post by george on Aug 12, 2009 19:38:51 GMT -5
Im not waiting another 11 minutes >_>
Chapter 7
Fighting was not all George and Goosey thought about. They both loved working out and having fun. But being warriors to serve their land went above that. As long as they had their sense of humors and wits, they could travel with each other. They come from far to the east, where everything was peaceful and calm. Not like a utopia, just somewhere you felt safe. When The Elites first came about, most cities requested any able body between 15 and 45 to become warriors and train for in case of attack. No one in their city really wanted to at first. But once a 6th one came about and came to rule their city, everyone started training the moment they found out. The day Elite 6 struck, he was killed almost immediately. How? When there are a lot of men and woman fighting to their deaths to stop you, its hard to win. When Elite 6 perished, The Elites became The Elite 24, 24 Elite men who were going to reign their terror over the world. Goosey and George were sweating due to how close the blade had got, because it was scorching hot. However, the blade just stayed there for about 15 seconds before being pulled back. Elite 16 was paralyzed. George and Goosey felt power surge inside of them, and they grew from around 6ft to huge, 8 foot, 350lbs warriors. Their weapons grew to diamond edged swords suitable for their size and strength. In place of the shields, was pieces of melted down and cooled rock and steel, with gold dust thrown in. The result was extraordinary: solid protection from a sword. Not even the force of 20 warriors could knick it, let alone damages it. They turned around to see Bruce. He came over and joined the fight. Elite 16 didn’t seem to care. George, Goosey, Bruce Vs. Elite 16 Enemy Turn. Elite 16 is paralyzed and cannot attack. Your Turn. George spears Elite 16! 175-20=155 Goosey upper cuts Elite 16! 155-18=137 Bruce uses Impact! George and Goosey’s attack/strength rise by 35! Enemy Turn. Elite 16 is paralyzed and cannot attack. Your Turn. George slashes Elite 16! 137-23=114 Goosey uses deflect! Any attacks on him will damage the attacker! Bruce staff-whips Elite 16! 114-8=108 Enemy Turn. Elite 16 comes back to his senses! Your Turn. George spears Elite 16! 108-29=79 Goosey defends! Defense +5 Bruce defends! Defense +5 Enemy Turn. Elite 16 Summons Break! George’s stats return to normal! Goosey’s stats return to normal! Bruce’s stats return to normal! Elite 16 can now attack twice each round! Your Turn. George Vertical slices Elite 16! Miss! Goosey spears Elite 16! 79-16=66 Bruce stabs Elite 16! 66-7=59 Enemy Turn. Elite 16 summons all his might. Elite 16 slashes George! Critical Hit!!! 100-57=43 Your Turn. George summons all his might. Goosey summons all his might. Bruce uses Heal! George record 45 health! (93) Enemy Turn. Elite 16 spears Bruce! 120-30=90 Elite 16 spears Bruce! 60-27=33 Your Turn. George unleashes his power on Elite 16! 59-39=20 Goosey unleashes his power on Elite 16! 20-37=death. Elite 16 fell over the edge of the building to his death! A new feeling George and crew had never known rose over them. They felt accomplished. They felt bad for killing, but good that a threat to their world was gone. They also had returned to their normal size, but with the same weapons, just6 smaller models.
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Post by David on Aug 12, 2009 23:22:53 GMT -5
when did elite 24 turn to elite 16? ...
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Post by george on Aug 13, 2009 20:25:19 GMT -5
What? You got confused. I should really change it. Im going to fix it. This Elite Soldier was always 16. You got confused in my easily misguided chapters.
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Post by David on Aug 13, 2009 20:47:31 GMT -5
What? You got confused. I should really change it. Im going to fix it. This Elite Soldier was always 16. You got confused in my easily misguided chapters. Haha, this is true I did. Is there a grammar check too? lol it's kool though
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Post by george on Aug 15, 2009 21:13:02 GMT -5
Im currently rewriting all the current chapters. So far, only Chapter 1 is rewrote (just started ). Expect all to be done tonight with a new chapter tonight and tomorrow (not like they were all added up anyway... They shortened up for a few chapters. Chapter 8The world was stunned when they heard how three people were able to take out the base camp with Elite 16 in it. Plus, now there were only 23. They have suffered two loses now. George, Goosey, Bruce, and their party, who had chosen to stay with them, were wanted dead by Elite 1, the main Elite dude. “Were heroes now,” Josh commented. “Yea, but were also wanted dead by the other Elites,” Goosey mentioned. “Meh. If we can take down #16, we can handle it.” “We?” “Erm…Hey look out!” Josh pushed Goosey, right before a sniper round hit where his head was. Thankfully he moved. “We’ll get him.” Guard 12 and George said. Guard 12 and George Vs. Sniper Soldier Your Turn. Guard 12 punches Sniper Soldier! 45-5=40 George Spears Sniper Soldier! 40-11=29 Enemy Turn. Sniper Soldier comes at Guard 12 with a knife! 60-7=53 Your Turn. Guard 12 hits Sniper Soldier in a pressure point! 29-20=9. Sniper Soldier is paralyzed! George spears Sniper Soldier! 9-12=death. Sniper Soldier faints! “I wonder what he was doing out here.” George wondered, and then noticed someone looking at him. He noticed what this person was doing, and got in front of Guard 12 at the last second to spare. A gun went off. George went down. Everyone else came rushing up, and the person threw down the weapon in disbelief. He was taken by Guards 2 and 8 then. “Give us one reason we shouldn’t f**king kill you? You just shot our leader!” Goosey shouted. “I didn’t mean to. I swear! I was hired to take out the other one and that Josh person,” the guy said. “You failed. Its mission over for you,” Goosey hung the guy by one foot over the cliff. “Wait! Elite 4 hired me. He said to take you out one by one. When the sniper failed, I was to take out one of the people who stopped him.” He explained. “Where is Elite 4 located?” Bruce asked. “From here, travel north. He is just south of Mount Riback. You can find his hideout at the base of the mountain.” Bruce signaled Goosey that that’s all the info they were going to get. Goosey dropped the guy. End of Chapter
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